Thursday, May 24, 2007

They..

Taking the wings of fire did I fly
And looked down upon the sky
They saw my fame
But I was the same

Woozing blood from every wound
Did I hit the ground
They saw my shame
But I was the same

P.S : This is my first translation ever, i wonder how i dared to do it on a writing from sri sri. I know its softer than what sri sri meant. i hope i come out with better things soon

5 comments:

The optimist from utopia said...

hmm.. Is it some telugu poem or something?

Unknown said...

:)

nice ryhm.
seems like words depicts the intention. its very soft. like... its' written by someone who doesn't respond to his ups n downs but to the comments ;)

great try. sri sri wud've felt bad for being so hard. really its softer...

ChandraRekha..... THE ENIGMATIC.... said...

hiiii
liked it....
it shows d hypocrisy of d people.....
nd again d moral z....2 b like a lotus leaf, in water but untouched nd not affected by it........

arvind....in trans said...

really cool one...very short...but very meaningful..i actually got involed...and characterised me..:D

hope i write a good one ...sometime...like u do.. :)

vinny said...

thats a fine piece of translation